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As-tu su que . . .

Le jeune homme était debout sous la pluie.
Il regardait le jeune Dieu de la Mort
Aux yeux noirs, sans lui parler, sans émotion.

La mort a souri.  Il s’est moqué de lui en silence.
Il montrait au jeune inspecteur qui avait le plus de pouvoir.
Le pauvre homme.  Si seulement il avait su . . .

C’était une guerre des esprits.  Qui gagnerait?
Juste une faute determinerait qui tomberait.
C’était un jeu dangereux qui’ils jouaient.

À la fin il y avait une flaque de sang.
Un éclat de rire dans la nuit.
D’un souffle final quelqu’un a demandé la justice.
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This was a French assignment that ended up turning out better than I thought. It actually was written with the "battle" between Light and L from Death Note in mind. But anyway just thought I'd share.

Oh and for anyone else out there that speaks French, please don't be offended by any bad grammer or bad word usage, I'm only a high school student forced to take a language.

Here is a basic translation for those of you who don't understand a lick of French (i don't think it sounds as good in english):

Did you know that . . . .

The young man was out under the rain.
He watched the young God of Death
With black eyes, without speaking, without emotiong.

Death smiled. He mocked him in silence.
He would show the young inspector who had more power.
The poor man. If only he had know . . .

It was a war of minds. Who would win?
Just one fault would determine who would fall.
It was a dangerous game that they played.

In the end there was a splash of blood.
A burst of laughter in the night.
One final breath that demanded justice.
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~EveryLlamasEnvy:iconEveryLlamasEnvy: Apr 13, 2008, 3:57:41 PM
in your translation, it says "if only il had know"


whoot whoot awesome death note french stuff!!!
~MistressDominatrix:iconMistressDominatrix: Apr 13, 2008, 4:26:38 PM
oops! L's bad!! I'll get him to go fixed it right now!

Yay for Death Note in french!! :D

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